This is my double page spread draft with the improvements I was given on it. I have kept the original picture and stuck with the typical image on one side and text on the other. The reason I did this was because I tried to form the text around the image but it did not look like a proper music magazine, while setting it up like this it does look like a professional double page spread seen in a music magazine. I also stuck to the conventions of NME, by not asking questions instead letting Jake speak on aspects of his career. I put the bits where Jake did not speak in a bold font so my target audience knows which parts Jake is speaking in the interview. I also kept the text colouring red as it ties in with my colour scheme. I also made the font size smaller as in NME the font is about size 9 where before mine was size 14. I also changed the fonts of the two pull quotes. This was a key area for me to improve because in my previous draft the fonts were different and this is not usually seen in a music magazine. Finally I checked over and made sure there were no spelling and grammar errors and made sure that my two page numbers are viable to see as that is a basic convention which I missed out last time I made my double page spread. I am pleased with this as I have sorted out basic errors I have made to improve my work.
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