Today I got some feedback on how I can include my front cover, double page spread, and contents page. The main issues I have with my front cover is that I haven't used informal language all over as I have said 'The New Up and Coming Talent Nick Frost.' This is to simplistic to use on a front cover so I will change this simple to 'Nick Frost.' I have also done just basic spelling errors and not made clear on how the pug relates to Jake. I also plan to get rid of the limited edition sticker as I have not made it clear why it is a limited edition copy. Finally I just need to make my masthead, barcode, and banner a bit bigger so they all complement well with the main cover image. My contents page just has basic errors but also I have misplaced things such as putting my features as regulars. Finally I have put Katy Perry in gigs where on my front cover it is talking about her new album so I need to create a chemistry with the front cover and contents page and I will change this. For my double page spread I simply need to improve my spelling and grammar.
I can use this blog as a checklist for making my final few changes on my front cover, contents page, and double page spread to help me create the best possible work I can.
